Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Just a story.

It was bitter cold out, and I was watching T.V., playin' around on the computer when I felt the freezing draft hit me. Emma's son had been over to give her a couple of gifts for her birthday, a little calender that you rip off the pages/days as they go by and a snowglobe that you put your own picture in.

The draft must have been hitting my leg for a few minutes before I became aware of, then concerned by, it. "Wonder what's goin' on?", I said, mostly to myself, "The front door must be open."

Sure enough the door was half ajar and I cringed to myself at the bitter, bitter cold that was the night 'out there' while feeling that good warm feeling of knowing that the solution to all my problems was 'just that' simple, and I closed it and locked it.

"Josh didn't close the door all the way, I was catching a freezing draft on my leg, it's bloody FREEZING out there!", I told Emma taking another look at her new picture-frame snowglobe thinking, "Wonder which dollar store that came out of?"

The night went on as usual, Emma called through that Fred, my deceased wife's dad had died. Not that Emma 'usually' calls through that Fred died, of course, just that she'll tell me 'things of interest' if and when they pop into her mind, and such. Old Fred was a nice guy and we had a 'history' quite a while back but I'd mostly lost touch with him over the years. He was one of those guys who was always old to me. He was old when I married his daughter, old when she died about ten years later and old when I'd see him on very odd occasions after that.

I thought about Emma's story about how her dad said that when he died he was going to come back as a crow and watch out for her. We'd laughed about that the odd times we'd walked past a couple of crows sitting on the wires.

The night rolled on as usual, "I'd have a drink for the memory of poor old Fred!", I called through to Emma, although it wasn't usual for me to drink to the newly dead Fred, I will respond with something from time to time. Emma wasn't taking the bait, no rum for me 'tonight'.

It was getting late so I settled Emma in for the night, which included picking up the bird from his make-shift perch, a fan, in her room, to put him to bed, and a glass of ice water for her, not from the tap, but from the cooler.

Prettyboy Floyd, insisted on riding on my shoulder to assist me getting the water for Emma but suddenly flew off, round and round the rooms finally settling on his cage and peeking out the door shaping himself in that banana shape that cockatiels get when they stretch their necks to peek.

I closed Emma's door for the night because she likes her thermostat set to "July", when we'd finished marvelling at how the bird gets scared by nothing at all, silly bird.

Off to bed for Prettyboy Floyd, he gets on his perch next to his favourite mirror image, blanket over the top, but I don't close his cage door, I figure bird-brain or not he knows whether he wants to be in there or not as he is not shy about 'telling me' when he wants to be to bed sometimes.

So, I'm laying in the dark, the monitor glowing and the television flickering eerily as it is wont to do and the matress dips slightly, something has climbed on the bed with me.

"Oh, Prettyboy what's wrong with.. ", I started, turning towards what I imagined was going to be the bird and as I swung round from the monitor to face him my hand went around and touched what I still thought was him, except it felt a little too big to be him.

I don't think that you can imagine how surprised I was when I looked down at a cat! When I looked down at a charcoal grey cat with silvery tip ends like something peeking through the mist, in the flickery light of the television.

I scooped him, I'm calling it him here, I scooped him up in the blanket that he was laying on as if he were MY cat, or as if I were his owner and took the 'bag-o'-cat' I'd made and asked Emma if she could guess what I had.

After I'd popped him back outside, we chatted about how strange that was.. now I wonder if his name was Fred?

8 comments:

oneblood said...

I liked it Ian. Thanks.

pboyfloyd said...

No, thank you Monsieur oneblood. The copy/paste isn't working on my blog edit screen for some reason which makes it harder to edit.

I think that the 'Josh came over with gifts' seems to be plonked in there with no 'flow'.

On the plus side, you don't seem to be confused about who was/is who because of my writing.

oneblood said...

Define confusion.

I'd be overstepping my bounds to write what I'm going to write anyway.

One parent of mine was a journalist in a couple mid-size cities, had a column (of the kind unique to mid-size cities), and did freelance for about 20 some odd years. Then the parent up and got a doctorate in Psychology after which this parent published one or two books, and edited one I think.

What the above is not is a pedigree. What it is, is an elaborate excuse to say that I've been around one writer, and had it incessantly exposed to me in various forms enough to try and justify the complement I'm about to pay you.

I think you've got it. You know, the knack. I'm not saying your story was this or that superlative, just had a solid core.
I don't know if you write a lot, or not at all, or whatever...it's my unqualified opinion, that's all.

Cheers.

mac said...

Could be "Fred" was looking for a cockatiel sandwich?

pboyfloyd said...

Oneblood, all I was saying was that there seemed to be no confusion about who was who, interfering with the storyline.

Seemed to me that you weren't left wondering who the characters were given the amount of them in this extremely short story.

mac, I was thinking that the cat probably would have gotten around to the bird, one reason that I could not adopt him(or let him adopt us).

Asylum Seeker said...

Was really expecting you to have found a crow in your bed. A stray cat sneaking into your house is strange enough. But, even without the story about Fred wanting to come back as a crow, the idea of a random bird not only coming into your house but also setting itself on your bed is just a whole different level of surreal.

pboyfloyd said...

Aha! A possible bit of confusion there.

Emma's dad, Martin told her that he would come back as a crow, not Eileen's dad, my father-in-law, Fred.

Still would have been awesome for a crow to come and visit me, and even awesomer if it 'crowed', "Nevermore!"

oneblood said...

What if it asked you for a turkey sandwich? You would have to of course refuse, call it a fowl beast and demand that it leave your home.

Ah yes an aside inspired by that great Far Side cartoon of a cow flipping burgers on a barbecue.